You could always actually tell it from both POVs. That way the reader gets emotional intimacy with both of the main characters - like stay in one...
Thank you so much guys! And Cogito and lightcrawler I think you hit the nail on the head. The uncle actually does have another device which he...
Hi there! First of all I just wanted to say that I'm amazed at how professional you all are, and thank you for all the advice I've got just by...
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