Right, but she can be tested by this though. The allure of social standing as it were, and the pressures involved. A protagonist should be flawed...
as far as the complexity you mention here, i agree completely. it is the resolution of the complexity that leads to her change.
of course she had a plan! everyone has a plan. but what caused her to say, thats it! it needs to be a pivotal moment in her life, you see? she...
how about some element of protectiveness. Like, she knows its been too much, but she is a bit of a martyr. however, when his abusiveness spills...
on post it notes or elsewhere? hahaha. no, i have only the one, and an outline for two sequels. right now i am working on a sort of pseudo memoir....
* So make it realevant to mindset *
you feather in physical appearance as its relevant to mind state. everything is perception, remember. what is attractive here, thin, tall, ect,...
Lo Lots of post it notes. My first novel I wrote was outlined almost entirely on post its. Love em.
well, no matter the seeming glamour of a 17 year old, it is only in appearance, and the harshest thing that can be done, as far as betrayal, is to...
You've given me the itch to write again btw. It's almost one here and I am up messing with my manuscript. :)
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