Men may not wear make up much but we have shaved, dyed our hair and used moisturizer on occasions. Tattoos have been around for a while too....
green would be nice :)
If the past is important perhaps you should cover it all in capter one as a story in itself. Unless it would be considered spoiler or its too...
macdonalds :)
fairies get my vote ooh what about a fairy that goes to high school
what about "shaun of the dead":p
i thought the semicolons were correct
jet packs are still the most likely solution
personnally armageddon was a pretty good effort with the jet suits and jets on the vehicles try that you could have your car chases and running...
welcome don't worry about the semicolon. I've come to realise its the story and how easy it is to read not the grammar that is important. Have fun :)
mars doesn't have a magnetic pole....sorry :)
Increasing the gravitational force of mars would not affect the planets as much as that it would cause an increase in vibration from all the...
agreed. especially when cold I also agree with your earlier comment - ask your self this is the book finished. If it seems its missing something...
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