Another word that may need fixing: it's "brake" fluid, not "break". I've made the similar mistakes many times, so don't feel bad.
The words, flotsam and jetsam, imply contempt for the people. It sounds as if they are considered trash, waste, discards. In other words, debris....
A British newspaper once, many years ago, published a list of word comparisons of terms used by three classes for common things in everyday life....
Muddy130 "I would start at the middle of the story or some where close to the middle. Sometimes if you start talking about things the reader don't...
I have no need to get shirty, as you call it. I agree completely. Bad writing has spoiled many a good story, even ones by best-selling authors,...
You're right of course. It's my excuse for not laughing at comedy shows on TV when I think they're stupid. I have actually watched whole movies...
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Observation. Listen to the people around you, those you meet in your daily routine. Find out something about their backgrounds. Well-educated...
I believe I was asking for opinion, not advice, but thanks for answering. BMACD Both can definitely work. I think A might be a nicer option,...
The novel is about a group of people embarking on a long voyage from which they will probably not return. Do you prefer: A) Introducing the...
My advice is to keep your writing as simple as you can. Don't go at it with the attitude that you are creating great literature. Write as if you...
I agree with Cogito. It's not something you can force; either you've got it or you haven't. I am content to admit I don't have a sense of humor...
Separate names with a comma.
