Hmm interesting. Just to clarify, if I wrote a sentence and it still makes sense if I removed 'that' from its place, I should delete it?
Hi guys, I've noticed in my writing that I use the word 'that' quite liberally. I'm beginning to wonder if it even belongs there. For example:...
All of the villagers were exempt from the law except for the ones who were serving that particular day. Did I unwittingly lump the women (the...
Hmmm you're right. That does sound kind of strange. I've changed it. How does this look as the final draft? No one who was about to enter...
I don't really have a problem with my characters swearing. Like I said before, my male MC doesn't really have that type of nature (he's a nice...
I agree with CH878's "passionate anger" spiel. My male MC is really quite a nice guy and the way he came to life doesn't really strike me as the...
Thanks. That sounds even better! :D
That, I swear, is going to be my new mantra. Microsoft Word is sometimes pretty bad with grammar checking, but this was the first time I've seen...
Hey guys. Just to ask for your opinions, how often do you have characters swearing in your stories? Here, I'm writing about a male MC who...
Hi everyone, my word processor is telling me something I've never heard of before and don't know how to fix. The sentence is: No one who was...
Actually, I'm not sure I really want to be in university at all. I'd really like to take up a Professional Chef career, but my parents aren't all...
Oh hahahaha! Thanks all! I don't know what possessed me to be stuck on such a silly statement. I guess I can't just randomly put un-somethings...
Separate names with a comma.
