Thank you for the advice!
I want someone that will read the entire book and give advice not on editing but in the plot. Like help me find weaknesses so I can sew them up...
It was definitely important They were reviewing a security feed and they saw something important and immediately left The thing they forgot was to...
I had a moment where characters went to a place to do two things. But they did one and left. And I got so caught up and forgot to have them do the...
She understands murder is wrong. She understands what ethics are. She just feels no inward pull towards being ethical. Though she is sad about...
Her friends. She thought she lost them when they saw who she was. But they gave her a second chance. They want her to grow. So she is trying to...
But what if she truly turns over a new leaf and does all the things that you'd consider right Help rebuild. Help save lives. Lived a life in...
Oh no. Nothing like self defense. Cold blooded murder. And nope. She's just a normal human from the Midwest. But this is why I opened the...
Oh yeah. That's good. A good twist on dodging jail. Funny enough I saw a similar story in which someone advised the government to punish a...
I gave it that second like for ya. Funny enough in this situation. She actually tried to dodge accountability for what she did with the law...
It's funny you mention that cuz that's kind of what I'm trying to write. Basically the first arc of book 2 centers around a character trying to...
What do you like to see from redemption Arcs? Like what makes you root for them to succeed in going heel-face. Is there times it annoys you? Is...
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