In a world where you already have fairies and elves why does she need to be transported into a whole other world with fairies and elves? Why not...
In my head I read your subject in the voice of Dracula. It seems that and elf can't take a step without being sentenced to death. What is the...
The connections seem loose at best. With no single element to connect them all, such as a single, all encompassing larger plot, like in Heroes or...
Why is it so important? If Vida does not get this information at this point in time what will happen? Are the heroes of this story only able to...
It should come across rather quickly (within the first two pages) roughly what age your characters are by: Their behaviour. Their attitude. Their...
Maybe I've been conditioned growing up on shows like The X-Files and Xena but explicit expressions of romantic love take all the intrigue out of a...
If you're struggling for ideas go back to why you want to write this particular story and these particular characters. Why are you writing about...
The easy twist is that the guy from the mental institution actually fell into hell and never left. A more interesting twist could be that he is...
Do you mean: During the creation of a character? or During the narrative? If you are talking about how to develop a character during its...
Spoken like a true young person. If you're even a moderately decent person with kids, there probably isn't a minute goes by you're not thinking...
Jonathan didn't need to tell anyone what the book was. You can only read what's in it through a looking glass after all. Also, if the book, and...
It seems arbitrary that Jonathan couldn't bring himself to burn the book. If he really felt it was that dangerous why didn't he get his horrible...
I'm sorry, @pamedria. I didn't mean for my comment about letting the marketing team decide the genre to upset you, if it did. But you started...
Write your story your way. If and when you getting a publishing contract, let the marketing team decide what genre it is.
Is it set in a madey-uppy world? Yes? It's fantasy. (I know I keep saying madey-uppy but I heard Stephen Fry say it on QI and now it has made...
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