It's a bit hard to find anything wrong in a synopsis, let alone a very short synopsis. From your description the story could be really good,...
"Good morning!" Dogs playing with their owners Light gusts of wind on a beach or in the middle of a field Young couples/newlyweds...
Punishment is so overrated. If you want your story to have a 'moral' tone where 'right' always triumphs over 'wrong', you should at least consider...
Using metal objects to fiddle around with toast while it's still in the toaster is supposed to be one of the most common accidental deaths, and...
I think that would be 'Wu', if it's Chinese. Then again, neither were originally spelt using the Latin alphabet. Of the suggested surnames, the...
Though presumably they were modern translations of the Iliad, the Odyssey and Beowulf...or in the original languages, in which case 'celebrious'...
I think it's a really nice idea, however you don't need to ask others for confirmation that it is a good story, especially if it's a short story...
You need to understand exactly what the word you are using means. The words a thesaurus suggests may be synonyms or near-synonyms, but in the...
I don't know about the USA, but in the UK about 24,000 people earn over £500,000 per year ($1,000,000 converts roughly to £650,000). That's...
Some writers try to make things like incest and bestiality 'romantic' (in a pretty loose sense of the term), and though highly controversial and...
I'm a secular-agnostic who has grown up in a family of agnostics and atheists, and probably more than half of my friends have been strict...
It's difficult to know exactly how anyone would react in a situation like this, but I'd stay away from the sudden group panic that might seem the...
It depends a lot on what kind of story you're writing. Fantasy or science fiction might benefit more from a setting being created first, as a...
It's not exactly Borat, is it? Sure, somebody will be offended, but anything will be offensive to someone and most people who would be offended...
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