No, actually in this situation the kiss doesn't need to only be the first. The entire story is...wierd. I suppose I should explain the concept....
The reason for the quotes around first come to the context of the sentence, and would not be apparent from that excerpt. That was perhaps a bad...
I have a question pertaining to style in short stories and long short stories. To what extent can you have a narrator describe events in general...
Are these sentences grammatically correct? My parents were many things, but never dreamers. Most would count only those whom they kiss in the...
It seems as if the usage of the semicolon is simply not in some sort of literary 'vogue'. While the annoyance it causes to professional 'literary...
Hello. I'm just another would-be writer. I have a short story I'm halfway through, but you won't be seeing it anytime soon. I've been browsing...
Separate names with a comma.