It definitely sounds like it wasn't for you then. But perhaps consider trying a different one, they do have different effects and if you do find...
Make the tough guy thing a front, he acts that way but deep down there are things he really cares about. Maybe hes lying to himself about how much...
Another thing that realy makes me like secondary characters is mystery. In fact most of my favourite characters in books are secondary characters,...
What have you got to lose by just carrying on writing? Don't set out to achieve anything, or write a good story, or any story at all. See it as...
You say your writing isn't adult enough, but you know you don't have to write for adults. Many best-sellers are for young adults and the language...
I suffer with depression, and I honestly don't know how it's possible for people to write without medication. I cannot read, I cannot sleep, I...
I think as long as people will find it easy to find your book should they go searching for it, then it's fine. The problem could be if someone...
I love series of books but agree that I can't stand cliff hangers. The first book should definitely be stand alone, I don't mind as much a cliff...
I think it needs conflict, that makes it interesting. That doesn't mean it has to be serious, it could just be minor, like two have clashing...
It's believable but takes a big leap and needs some intermediate steps. The first thing I would expect would be for Martha to confront the MC...
Seems you have given yourself a difficult task to do! Your protagonist sounds like a villain. The most obvious way is to make it personal for...
I tend to only use descriptions that reflect a character's personality. For example if I want someone to appear obsessed about their outward...
I would approach it this way, if scholars can't agree then that means that no one really knows. So you can choose whatever is most interesting for...
AIUI, you don't need a special browser for the dark web, but it is a protection for you because you cannot be traced to be looking at these dodgy...
No, two words - James Bond. Bond is usually the same at the end as he is in the beginning, just with a few more scars. I think these types of...
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