I didn't read the whole topic, so I apologize if I'm repeating something someone else already said... You should kill your most beloved...
I didn't read the whole topic, but I have one thing to say that the first twenty posts or so don't: Don't let guessing the ending stop you from...
Don't sweat it. I watch Nickelodeon about as much as I do every other channel. And the Disney, Pixar, and Dreamworks animated films usually rock...
It sounds like you should combine your sad and happy endings. Think of how much sadder it will be if he croaks during the parade. It's the...
I agree with what has been mentioned but want to add one thing: While more trivial traits such as extroverted/introverted, hairstyles, etc....
I love the sound of this! Are these afterwords common? I've never seen one because I don't read much. If the tense switches from past (the...
I don't think Ziggy meant to imply your writing isn't good, jazzabel, and I too think that placing the physical description right where the...
(What I mean by "the mirror trick" is when you have the POV character look in a mirror and physically describe him/herself.) In short, I used...
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