I don’t mind her admiring herself, I just don’t remember her pausing for a moment and reflecting upon where it’s all coming from. She only did it...
Avatar is really Pocahontas in space, though. The moral teaching is exactly the same, the story’s set up is the same, the main character’s...
Oh, yes, sure, sure! I hope it didn't seem like I was imposing my ideas. It's just how I personally feel about that book... ^^' I've seen many...
If the careers were using their better condition to oppress people from poorer districts just because they can, I'd think this reasoning would...
But it isn't a lesser version of the former. I've read both. Divergent and the Hunger Games have nothing in common except that they're both YA...
I don't think the way you present the Divergent conflicts is fair. Tris has to choose between staying or leaving home, yes, but the choice she...
I was planning on posting my writings in the Writing Workshop for critiquing, until I read in the publishing forum that literary agents don't...
Hey everyone, I've started writing a novel around a year ago and yet I haven't written even one chapter. I have around 18,000 words in total, but...
Is it odd just because he kept his accent or is it odd because he kept it while his brothers didn't? Because I can have them all speak British,...
Thank you all for your help! What I get from your answers is that both keeping and losing his accent are possible, but how believable it is...
I'd like one of my characters to have lived in one country and moved to another afterwards, but still speak with the accent of his country of...
Hello! I'm making this thread because I'm struggling a little with the tenses and punctuation of thoughts. I will enumerate all the most...
Separate names with a comma.