It allowed fantasy to mix in. Shooting shaped lasers, seriously. xD
Sorry for being late. Thank you guys so much, very very helpful. :p I'm glad my thread was helpful for you Candy. So, I do write how my POV...
I do mix, it's very important. But same voice can also feel repeated.
Without passive voice, I feel like every sentence would be They did that, They did this, bla bla, it makes the book somehow poor and...
I am writing my first novel, sci-fi, so I am inexperienced with some 'rules'. I have a few questions google seems to fail to answer, so hopefully...
It's supposed to mean they still haven't find the cure, yet. Sorry I am late, half of my touch screen broke. :/
Can we say: Nor we still got a cure. ? I can't think of a flowing sentence for this. :confused:
Thanks, I'll look it up. And I agree, I'll first finish the notebook draft. Sorry for late reply, I didn't have access to internet these past few...
Well, I am not sure, but all books people here write have a style like they were written 500 years ago. :/ I don't like that... That's a nice...
That's good to hear, thanks a lot. I never liked to force in more words, that's why my essay grades were awful, and why I don't want to write in...
Btw, the person is constantly absorbing energy, but they can release more while still absorbing the lesser amount...and I just confused myself. :/...
Oh, then I am gonna review it once again, thanks. ^^ Right now, I am reading some threads and started to worry about word number of my book. How...
I am currently writing by hand before typing it all. I have only 8 pages of word so far, and a lot more in my notebook. I just leave lines in...
Separate names with a comma.
