If misused is the idea. The site lists the imagery and writers add it in how they see fit.
eyes rolled up in his head is also seen in harry poter
Intriguing. However, if I placed two paragraphs here, right now(without bold), would you then be able to tell which is taken from...
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But a new writer can get ideas, learns ways to incorporate imagery, and feel more comfortable with the art. Many of my friends have used it. It...
This is for writers who need help and for new upcoming writers
Firstly, please explain how it is jarring. Then, explain how the bold parts can be improved. The technique in which you decline, is your choice....
For the first example, chickenfreak said it has coherency problems. For the second, he said it was distracting. Using this website's imagery is up...
These are bits and pieces from a potential story here. Whether the author wants to have the guy a part of their story is up to them. Gasps of all...
interesting input
It's not very complicated. No sale doesn't offend me Cogito
I happen to disagree. In the excerpt that you've read, how has the voice change. Please explain.
More modifiers do not ALWAYS make the writing better, but in this case it did. You must use your own judgement.
Maybe I need help with my writing, however the website is still useful. For example you plug in the imagery so that it'll make since. Also, people...
The website is simply helpful. I'm afraid I'm not getting paid for this. I wish though, :)
Separate names with a comma.