It sounds better with the comma in my mind. You could always try to rewrite to make it a separate thought?
I think i will take people's advice on making the sentences active instead of passive. That would cut down on commas as well as read more...
Ok. So one of my flaws as a writer is to use waayyy too many commas. Is anyone able to give a general guideline to comma usage?
Welcome! I'm looking forward to reading something of yours!
Separate names with a comma.