It didn't happen to be The Americans by Robert Frank, did it? The pictures aren't all of children/teens but still they're very inspiring!...
This sounds like it would be an interesting read!!! But I'm glad to hear it doesn't take much to change during editing. Oooh I love this idea!! :)
But on the other hand, don't try to over-describe your characters. When I'm reading books I like to be able to fill in the gaps with my imagination.
There is nothing wrong with long dialogue as long as it is interesting and relevant to the story. I've just started reading Midnight in the...
This could be a perfect starting paragraph for a short story, where in the story you slowly let the reader know what caused this to be etched in...
My Grandad uses this tense all the time to tell stories of his childhood! :-)
I also just noticed that one of the 'tags' of this post (scroll down to see them) is 'king' :confused: but nowhere in the post I mention a king!!...
Thanks all for your comments. And good point Amsterdam that I'm not actually halfway through... I still have so much editing to do it's not funny....
I'm halfway through my novel (55,000 words) and I've written everything so far in past tense (he said, we went etc.) BUT I've been thinking a lot...
From watching a few reality TV shows about psychics, spirits seem to be near their loved ones, especially if they're trying to get a message...
What do you mean by 'fade in'? Do you mean you want to slowly let the reader know these facts throughout the first paragraph?
Also, do you have to limit it to just what the couple of soldiers on patrol are doing, and in chronological order? A couple of options to fill the...
Separate names with a comma.
