What a nightmare this must be! I heard the news about flooding in San Antonio over the weekend and hoped that you had been spared. I'm sorry to...
Congratulations minstrel. From what I've seen, you'll make an excellent moderator.
Finding one's own voice is a problem for every writer in the beginning. I don't think it necessarily comes down to sentence construction or...
My apologies, Xatron. I misread your comments as an argument with a previous post.
Wow. Sexist and racist in the same sentence. As far as men being better drivers than women, as all men believe, read this:...
As thirdwind said, I think your question was about point of view or POV. The choice of POV is entirely at your discretion. It's usually a...
Ouch. I'm sorry to hear about this. Hopefully you'll be able to work something out with the disk recovery option. About your clicking external...
I want to add my congratulations and also say that I'm impressed and inspired by your perseverance. Good luck on the next draft.
I don't think anything is banned from conversation on this part of the forum. Look under the Free Speech subsection of the forum rules.
I think 'chalk it up to karma' works here. The beginning of the phrase, 'chalk it up to', is an idiom expressing a belief in causation as in...
I think the third sentence works fine as 3rd person limited. The 'Senisa knew' is implied. If you have concerns, write it explicitly: Senisa...
I can't remember everything I read back then, but I think that Romeo and Juliet was in there somewhere. I'm very sure of what I didn't like. If...
I think it was Faulker who said he never completed a work, he just abandon it. At some point you have to say you've done your best and send the...
If you just change the actions of a few minor characters in relation to the big picture, I don't think it would be alternate history. For me,...
Separate names with a comma.