Yes, I think that's the problem here. Thank you for pointing that out. At any rate, blurb or synopsis, it could definitely be done better. So...
Well, thanks for your honest opinions. But not to worry, the plot itself is full of twists. LOL
The sister with the MRSA trouble is a sub plot that helps tie things together. There are other elements coming into play with the female MC.
How much of the story line should I include in the synopsis? I don't want to give too much away. Just want to draw curiosity.
I've got a story going involving a student/teacher relationship (not as corny or risque as you might be thinking) and one of the characters (the...
Hi, thanks for your reply. :) yeah, the drama is plot-relevant and leads to advancements, so I guess it's legit.
How much is too much? So far, my MC's are dealing with quite a bit of drama in their lives (though not really over the top) and things are...
I look forward to reading, reviewing and posting some of my own work for critique. Would read some more now, but have lots of work to do....
Hi, Maranda, nice to meet you. I, too, have children and know what it's like. lol, difficult to focus on big projects unless you do so in the wee...
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