Hi, I'm going to second everything that others have said, but there are a few other bits I think need a tiny bit of tweaking. By using "but"...
I have nothing against violence in books and it can be extremely enhancing. All I would say is that: if you're thinking about putting extreme...
I tend to be the complete opposite, for better or worse. I'm extremely slow and work on each idea for a very long time until i feel it's as good...
Personally, I quite enjoy reading slower pieces with lots of commas, and I have a tendency to use them frequently as well. Ultimately it depends...
Thanks Lulu, i'll definitely give it a read. I guess, when it comes down to it, I'll just have to make a judgement call on what feels best at the...
Okay thanks, haven't seen Megamind, maybe I should check it out :) and I've been meaning to read Fight Club for some time now, so thank you for...
Thanks for the comments, @Mobhit:Thanks for the advice and good luck with your book :) @Tesoro: Okay thanks, I'll check that novel out :) and...
I cannot explain it from a different viewpoint in terms of a character or person, but to do it in light of events that have happened throughout...
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