I never stopped writing by hand. Now, don't get me wrong, I can't write print to save my life. But I do write cursive. There's something...
When it comes to reading and critiquing other people's works, less is often more. It's tempting to go line by line and point out all the mistakes...
I think Batman Begins said it best: It's not who you are underneath, but what you do that defines you. And as I always say, the best way to make...
What I was getting at is that if you want to make him have a story arc, then you need a different character setup. What you have here is a...
Well, if that's just how he is, then of course you're not going to find a story arc.
This didn't answer my question. I'm going to rephrase what I was asking: 1. What does he want? 2. Why does he want it? 3. What is keeping him...
What are his goals, motives, and conflct?
The best way to approach this problem is to probably see if there are other ways. Is there a way to convey the information you want to convey...
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