I think it's good to have another writer review another's work and it can always be helpful when suggesting different things with their piece....
Not sure if they already have a thread like this, I did check and couldn't find one so if there is then I apologise and lock away! So have you...
I know he cares for me, very much but it wouldn't bloody kill him to show it here and there y'know?! What date? Ours will be on the 1st.
Nothin' special with my name. It's just my real first name and then RAK (A small, inside joke Roll An' Krone)
Gah, so yeah a bit late due to the date of V-day but it's been playing on my damned mind. So my boyfriend and I decide that because it's our...
Perhaps you could leave out the first few lines, write what you're confident with and then come back to the beginning, that's what I usually do...
So I finally wrote up an idea that has been playing on my mind all night and I can happily say I am very proud of my work, kinda’ nervous waiting...
Separate names with a comma.