I can dig it, cheers.
It is come to think of it, this perhaps: “Try not have too much fun without me” Lol only thing I could think of XD Maybe: “Don't have too much...
Last one I promise ;) “Yeah I’d really per fare if was a different colauuugg,“ his words were cut off when she pushed the ball into his mouth....
“Try and not have too much fun without me,” she replied, the mocking smile easily discernible on her lips. Yep this checks the boxes much better...
Okay guys and gals what about this one: “Try and not have too much fun without me” she replied back, the mocking smile now easily discernible on...
100% I think when anyone mentions present tense people lose their minds, lol I mean like you said different strokes for different folks. But I'll...
Yeah you make a very good point about exposure, whats been working for other people around you and what you've been seeing from others writing. In...
Yeah I think past just sounds more natural, it seems to have a better flow from screen to speech, to be honest guys I have just starting back...
Thanks for the reply Shadowfax some really nice suggestions there, so..Are you suggesting that I should use present tense? replacing was with is?
Again thank you for your input, yeah some of the tense rules I'm still working my head around. And I'll be sure to address those pesky run on's as...
Ah, Noted and fixed and thank you :)....Arhh I really don't know why I'm having trouble with such a basic language rule :(:(....Think I've been at...
Ah perfect, it was 2am when I wrote that so logic wasn't my friend haha. Anyway guys since finding all the tense errors within my fic I'm...
Thanks all for the replies, really learned alot about the different past tenses and their effective use, so thank you all again. So I think I've...
Hi all just wondering could I get some help with this I'm writing a Fanfic at the moment and I'm looking through trying to get the flow of the...
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