You have some great ideas! I have to really finalize one of the options and then move on. If I have a situation where I am talking to my...
Good ideas. The one in the Bus sounds interesting. I will have to think on those lines. The Psychiatrist doesn't sound right since it kills...
Hmm. True... I hope I dont cross the line and making the reader think that it is all about me. Reasons: the strength I possessed is not...
I am writing for the first time so I can be called an amateur writer, but the clarity is good and I think it is very readable.
I am writing from the point of view of an interviewer only because the story is becoming too much of "I did this... I did that.. I thought this.....
Nature of Miracles: Surviving in a concrete coffin (after an earthquake) for 100+ hours without food, water, movement, light. Alone. It is a...
Very true. I agree with your suggestion. In short I can tell you that it was beyond a miracle. Luckily enough I have the video footage of my...
Your theory sounds right. But in a few words this is what I can tell you: I was in a position to sprint when I came out. I was not even...
I am writing a story about my own life which is a story of miracles. This story of miracles is being written from an interviewer's perspective....
Exactly! That is where I am getting stuck and it is difficult to move forward every day. Different format?
Sorry for the delay in replying: Yes it was intense. Unimaginable. Devastating. It is a story of endurance and mind control.
Dehydration / dizziness / cramps etc. It did not happen to me... seriously. Its true... I was on my feet after the ordeal. Now, you have a...
Yes, thats a great point. I have done that.. and it works well and the story flows well. Great points .. but right now I need help since I am...
It was 6 days. Ask me. I cannot change the reality.
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