I'm not worried about the setting at all, it's a fairly developed world (with developed religions, "magics", governments, economies, climates,...
Everything sounds so terrible when I try to explain it... well, here goes. The setting is a fantasy world will people are rarely born with...
While I like some of the ideas, I personally dislike the whole "transported to a fantasy world" idea. It just feels really unrealistic and...
Normally I work out problems on my own, go to my sister (who will be dead to the world until tomorrow, at least) or ask at my old Writers'...
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