Keep the restaurant scene in, then read through a little later on and see if it fits.
That is a really good idea. I think I am going to go with this one!
A good example of a third person book which is written in a first person way is 'I am Legend' by Richard Matheson. Every so often he goes into...
I am basing one of my characters from one of my favorite actors. Although, I change the personality to suit the story.
Thanks for the reply. And this suggestion is a good idea for me. I could have the neighbor witness the car the vampire used. Thank you. =]
I am taking my first real stab at writing a story/novel. I settled with a plot that I like, but I am struggling with one key point. I hope guys...
Hello I have come here to improve my writings skills :) Looks like a nice place!
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