And that is my problem. As for knowing things, I got a fair idea of how things work, and most missiles aren't skin to skin kills, they're...
Got it, good book, but then there is only one rule I have when writing. Explain it, the readers want to know it, so they need to either hear...
Well, yes, that could work.... The thing is there is no force to counter the acceleration of the missile engine.... there is a point where it...
Alright, here me out before you say anything. According to Newton, any force in motion remains in motion until acted upon by another force,...
Too much detail, not enough character. What I mean by this is that someone is more focused on the world, not what the characters are doing. For...
Dialogue, my old Englih teacher loved what I wrote for a story because, to quote him 'they seemed alive, you heard the voices in your own head'...
Not really, the first Vlad Taltos book I read, by Stephen Brust I believe started with the follow lines. It was Dragon from memory. 'Memory is...
Your story, your ideas, not ours. As I see it, accidentally having him arrive in this other world is a much better start, as you can pull...
I agree with the above point. Recently, most of characters have been pilots, just squadron members, not leaders or second in command, or...
Well, could you please have a look at how you post. Only the first word of a sentence needs a capital. Just for next time, okay? For the plot...
Separate names with a comma.