Teenage characters in what era? The problem with trying to just give names is that everybody has different tastes, and it depends on if you...
Well, as you can see--my sentence didn't fail. It was quite effective, and got the point (which was not the point any of the suggested sentences...
mammamaia is right. All of those suggestions are great, but they wouldn't've worked for that reason. The story has been done for quite some...
Oh, that's fantastic! I had just substituted the pronoun: 'he knew that the only thing the ambulance would be doing was taking Carl to the...
I need this sentence, or one very similar to it, in the story. The narrator is holding his best friend while he (his best friend) is dying--he's...
"he knew that the only thing the ambulance would be doing was taking him to the morgue." It sounds a little syntactically awkward to my ear,...
Ohh, I love that song! At the moment (and for the past half an hour :redface:) I'm listening to Pulp's Pink Glove.
Separate names with a comma.