This reminds me of the main villain Sephiroth from Final Fantasy VII. He started out good, we get to play with him for a short while and...
This will probably come across as super naive, but bear with me. :D I'm nowhere near the submission stage, but following a brief research on the...
Instead of writing "he is sad", you could say "he wept silently when he thought no one was watching". In the former case, you are telling us...
Look at the bright side, we are constantly evolving and growing as writers. Some of the old writings can be hilariously bad in retrospect and make...
I read somewhere on the Internet (I think it's a reliable and credible source) that, unless you are a seasoned and renowned writer, if you write...
Extremely helpful, thank you ChickenFreak and Cogito! For those who have the same issues, I found these links to be helpful as well: Transitions...
Hello everyone, What are some ways to describe or indicate the passage of a short span of time (I use "a few moments later" presently, but I...
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