I like that 'he made a scoffing, dismissive sound.' I'll have to search through my book to find any time my characters snorted lol, and tweak it...
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I've probably used 'shrugged' and rolling their eyes at least five times throughout the book. Am I being overly paranoid when I think this is too...
Hmmm... thanks. I think I've used the grunted thing about four times so far (I'm at 36,000 words) but I am having trouble dwelling on things...
How do you put into words that thing people do where they kind of make a small grunting 'no comment' noise? Sort of a scoffing, dismissive noise?...
I have such bad ADD that I forgot I started this thread lol. I am going to try out some of those suggestions. I'm not sure about the listening...
Hi, I'm newish too. Looking forward to reading your stuff :)
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