it's not overbearing. The reader easily picks up on the fact that 'and' serves as a new comma. As for expectations, that is why I do it after a...
I'm not blogging about what editors and agents want. It's the craft, and those particular narrators happen to be a very big part of literature the...
I too was worried about the pacing, but you see, that is one of the key scene of my novel, and it is revisited near the end, and serves a purpose....
Thanks. I understand that my work is not going to sell. I only sent the first one out because I was told to do so by those who had read it as I...
My mistake, I guess. I thought if I break the sentence into it's parts, line it up to show the change in length, and then talk about the resultant...
I broke it down for you. I separated each clause into its own line, showing you how the word counts differ visually. How the first three increase...
It's is "prose-poetry". There is no narrative, so any adjacent bit of imagery would just confuse the reader. As for the why, isn't it obvious to...
That is fair. I have no problem with that. And I never asked to be believed. I came, posted a link, wrote an abstract that stated my intentions...
Lol. My writing is available to anyone who wants to sample! Just click on the link to amazon and take a peak. It's not that difficult. I'm not...
For you, and those wanting a more subjective analysis of a piece of work, I've posted one such example. It's entry #12. I hope you found it...
From entry # 2: All of your eager to improve your descriptive-narrative writing (which should be any aspiring fiction writer) just hold; we are...
Yeah, exactly. Oh, and I'll just go on and show you why I'm not just making shit up as you claimed. Here is a bit of the reserach I've done on...
Again, the blog has been up for two days! Lol. I'm building one post at a time, incrementally. And I'm not posting my own work because I'm showing...
Why don't you offer counter information to the stuff on my blog?
Lol. What exactly do I have to gain from bullshiting? Good God. I am simply letting people on this board know that there is relevant information...
Separate names with a comma.
