This is really helpful! Thank you!
This is perfect. Thank you so much.
Yeah, that's one of the slave functions -- working nonstop to fix the dome, under high pressure and in bad conditions, with no breaks, etc. And...
So in the new story I'm developing, some post-Earth settlers have colonized a new planet. A very small colony of world-leader billionaire types...
This exactly. A great short story to check out is Joe R. Landsdale's "Dog." It's about a guy out for a stroll when a large neighborhood dog...
Just from what you've described, I think your story sounds fascinating. I agree with the others that it's critical to NOT describe what's down...
I must say that I agree with Fatback about the 3rd example you posted. The first two examples aren't too bad at all...the sentences are long but...
There's a movie called "Disappearance." It's a 2002 made-for-TV movie that's actually pretty cheesy in terms of special effects, and there's also...
I talked about this in the monster thread over in the lounge, but I'll say it again here because it's relevant to this thread too. By the way,...
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