I get your point..I did choose a bad example to get my point across.. hehe.. I'm with you, the tense change is awkward there.. Can you take a look...
In the first case my intention was to space out the prose since this comes after quite a bit of high intensity scenes. And the sentence 'Hotels...
Hi Guys, I'm writing my first novel and I have a question regarding the tense. The novel is in Third Person POV and in past tense. But...
Thanks a lot JayG that did help. Basically, I have to move the camera from outside the characters head to inside it.
Excellent.. I get your point... It looks like I have a lot of ground to cover.. hehe.. One more question.. Although the POV character is not in...
Couple of questions 1. In a third person POV, aren't you supposed to be standing next to the character. Wouldn't this give you the freedom to show...
Thanks a lot for all the feedback.. I've tried to rework the passage .. Please take a look and tell me if this is better The beheaded body on the...
I get your point @ChickenFreak... Just as an example.. Here is an excerpt from the novel. A little context before that. The POV character is a...
A part of the novel I am writing is from the POV of serial killer who is kind of a loner. That limits his interaction to other characters. That...
The part I am writing right now is more of a monologue oriented one..and because of that the use of pronouns(he. him etc) are going out of hand.....
Hi All, A new writer here. I was just writing my first novel and I had a doubt regarding the use of He/She. I don't know what is appropriate....
Separate names with a comma.
