So, the viewer can see the image as it is sent to their retina (or better yet, optic nerve) but where's the camera the other end? As for the...
Nice map! As others have mentioned, the river is a problem for me. As Justin says, the Narrow Sand could be some sort of higher plateau, but I'm...
You're certainly right about a longbow been difficult to use and taking a lifetime to train in, but that is exactly why the crossbow came along....
Wow! Even without any details this looks like a massive improvement to me. The landmasses feel much more believable. Look forward to seeing this...
Thanks for the feedback GingerCoffee, looking at it now I can see the potential confusion. Re. dialogue tags, I did a few internet searches and...
No no no! Make room for a right-handed colleague on the right! Due to where my desk is at work, my colleagues always come up on my left, and as...
What's an elf anyway? It aggravates me when people conform to the Tolkien/Jackson version because they think it is correct. What about Santa's...
I've recently been working on an interrogation scene and this is a tricky one. I always think he shouted sounds a little juvenile for some...
Ooh I do love a good map! Looking great, although some sort of scale should probably be worked out before you go much further. For example, you...
This is a really interesting and fun idea for a thread! Might post mine up later... To mix it up a bit, I’ve grouped your names by...
Universities tend to be pretty major features of a town of city. I can't speak for the US, but in the UK many towns are defined as "University...
Names aside, you say Life is female and death is male. To balance it out, could spirit be neither or both or simply unknown? Could add to the...
I started my WIP some years ago, and focused heavily on world-building at the time. My process? I’ll share: I started with a rough world map...
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