I'm just glad I can help. There are plenty of times I need help nudging ideas around in my head too. And I'd love to see the end result!
I'd say same intent - and deliberate actions or not - it's alien technology it can use it's own locator system or have a homing beacon style setup...
Ah that works a little bit different then
Subtle influence from the artifacts 'enlightens' one of the researchers / political leaders / new organization members - possibly opening them to...
It could be an act of sabatoge - it could be an attempt of that new organization to further utilize the artifact in populace control ( of course...
Another idea - One ( or more ) of your colonies are speratists or specist or -insert bias here- and when the news of the artifacts reaches them...
@Defender. I think of it as the line Homo Homini Lupus ( man is wolf to man ). Sometimes it just comes down to survival and what humans will do...
Are these artifacts useful in supressinf the people? Or perhaps voiding certain conceived 'unalienable rights' by the populace? ( both of which...
A 'seat of power' kind of thing? Is Earth the 'cradle of life' for the rest of the planets - maybe play on not wanting to decimate the...
I'm just wondering if you can't play this whole comvo out in scene anyway which would be awesome. Say Sadae and some other hotline employee ( who...
I just came upon this thread today and I am loving it! As a general note in regards to plotting with romance : for the most part I feel like the...
Is there room in your scene for a 'lack of recognition' due to damage bit? Once the human form becomes broken beyond a certain point our minds...
You say the kid is useful throughout or becomes so . . . what if the MC take the kid 'under her wing' and brings her into the order? Using some...
Well and you also have the crisis of your MC making an ethical decision - which is more important to her : her duty to the assassin order or her...
If anything it depends on the psycho social context you want to set up for the character ( at least to me ) because I feel that there are two very...
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