"the man" "the one with the blue jacket" "Larson's Superior" Maybe those? Or, capitalize or italicize "he"? Hope it helps :)
This might help you somehow...http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm You could give her a negative traits. Short temper, greedy, anything...
He would probably just mope around. Your MC comes across a substantial amount of money! What do they do with it?
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Are there any motifs throughout your story? Themes? You could incorporate those into the title. Do you have an ending in mind or a "lesson" in...
Hi, welcome to the forums! :)
Hey welcome to the forums :)
Agreeing with Cog, you need to be able to make a character distinctive from all the other ones. Also, do you need all three characters? One thing...
Forums is one of the best ways to become a better writer; getting critiques and tips quickly from other writers, as well as improving by reviewing...
Good luck in your writing! I've seen a lot of good help for people on here, and I've only been here for a little while. Congrats on graduating! :)...
I've been to a few other writing sites, but it seems like one this large doesn't have that sort of "drama." The mods seem reasonable to me. Hope...
Hey! Welcome to the forum...I'm new here too! I'm looking forward to reading about your poetry
I've never printed out my work to revise it. I go through my work in the document and go over in another color, then I go back and see what I said...
Separate names with a comma.
