Goodness- I haven't posted here in forever. Anyway, I've just recently moved into a new apartment so I now have my own space to write in (small...
I could be completely wrong here, but to me it sounds like you have a solid beginning to your story, you know your characters well enough to be...
If he chose to help the "sicko", then the car ride scene would be the perfect place for him to express his feelings. The other man is wounded,...
I'm probably reviving a dead thread, and apologies if posting 2-months later is a no-no :( Though, I have a question similar to the last one that...
I agree with Cogito with his first post. I try, as best I can, to use proper grammar everywhere. It's especially useful when I'm being trolled...
Oh! One of my favorite books is written in a non-traditional time line! Dolores Claiborne by Stephen King starts at the end of the events that...
I don't know much about military strategy, or anything really, so I don't feel completely comfortable adding my idea, but here I go anyway :P...
This reply has nothing to do with the original post (sorry <3) but more to do with the replies it has received. I don't understand how difficult...
Rose is reading and re-reading her journal (the one with terribly drawn daisies covering the front), making sure she dotted all of her i's with...
I completely agree, Killian, that obsessing over nearly anything is detrimental to any goal. However, I don't think that anyone is obsessively...
I can't help but feel that you're expecting way too little from people when you preemptively decide that everyone's response will fit into a...
I've always liked the 'few against many' angle. It makes for some very powerful and moving scenes (movies and books (hell, even songs)). Also,...
Ah, a thread that reminds me of something I'm debating within my head! I have a question that I hope some of you can help with. I really want to...
Separate names with a comma.