Thanks so much so far for all of the suggestions and feedback. I have a few new things in the pot that you’ve given me to think about. As for how...
I can't quite tell if you’re trying to be helpful or just conceited. You make a pretty bold statement that I’ve basically plagiarized god...
What is your experience with using jargon in your writing? Does it alienate readers unfamiliar with the setting? Do you spend time to explain any...
Question, what do you think about purposely being vague in your writing for the purpose of keeping the reader in the dark? Having the MC have more...
@ChickenFreak Indeed, but I'll take her word for it because she has a degree in it, and Ginger coffee said so. Also, wrath of Mom. Also apparently...
Actually, I was just informed by my mother (an English teacher) that Italics are to be used for character thought. Seems I've been overruled....
My word this debate has been going for five years... I think by this point it's subjective to the writer. Hmmm, I wonder if this has been...
So, why not major in journalism? I know simple answer, probably won't interest you but just putting that out there. Or you could even study to...
So, if I say "His voice sounded like and old wooden door" that gives the reader something to hook onto, something they can pull from to describe...
What are some pitfalls for new writers? Things we should know, experiences you've had, setting expectations and growing. Your wisdom I seek, now...
I was implying it sounded like a feudal age, rather then a specific date. You know a time of knights, kings and lords.
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