Don't delete anything. Make three drafts of the first chapter, one version should be very stripped back and ruthless, one less so, and then your...
Maybe his goal could be to get back to his original planet but as he journeys through his birth planet he realizes that it's where he belongs. I...
I would say 6 POV's maximum, unless there are some who are 'one off's' so they have their own chapter and then get killed off or they don't...
I much prefer being able to imagine most of a fantastical realm myself, so I can put my own spin on what I see. For example think about what is...
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