I currently do have the escape close to the middle. I didn't want to make it too long so that it didn't bleed over into the end too much....
Hey everyone, I was hoping you guys (and girls) would lend me your ears and brains. The current script I'm writing is about a Prison Break on a...
I was going to give her both skills -- a Medic/Healer, along with being a skilled combatant with stealth skills. You know what, maybe the second...
I've started to notice the problem with that too. I think I'm going to get rid of it. I mentioned in an earlier post, I might make the Alien like...
Oh, now I see what you mean. That makes sense. Thanks for the all wonderful suggestions! This may seem a little cliche too, but maybe the Alien...
You guys are great. Thank you for all the advice. It's really helping me out a lot. I always have been interested in researching mythology, but...
I guess not. Not if it's that predictable and overused.
I didn't want to multi-quote all of you and unnecessarily take up space on the post, so I hope it's cool if I just tag you like this....
I'd be open to suggestions, honestly. Maybe take out the whole "Blood/Super Strength" thing? I figured the only Alien in the group should have a...
Yes, this is it exactly. But I really went out of my way to make sure they weren't cliches, but I guess I didn't do a good enough job.
Way back in my first draft of the script, I felt like the protag was too perfect, so I took a trait from myself and added it to her. I have trust...
I recently got a screenplay analysis back a few days and although the analyst said relatively good things about my script, he did say that my...
Hey, it's me again. I've been in-between scripts lately, but I've really been into this one, but I just can't seem to get it together. I have all...
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