Yea that's about how I have it now, Thanks. I really needed confirmation. It makes sense to me, I was worried it wouldn't to a reader.
I actually disagree with a lot of this. People say Devil May Cry, I say Tomb Raider. The fact that she was real did it for me. Characters...
*character lol won't let me edit typo subject sorry, if a mod could change please :) Hi, I have a character that speaks two languages. As a...
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