Yeah. That does look pretty clean and simple. I suppose the semicolon isn't entirely necessary due to the format of the poem. I was looking for...
I'm a big fan of capitalization. Any chance I can, I'll do it. It's so lovely.
The reason for the semicolon to allow for the two clauses to share a sense of intimacy or continued flow when read. Interesting reaction to the...
Well, you could see it this way: "Remain in this presence, attention of mine; give less power to that which happens in time."
...and the context is the speaker is telling 'attention' to do two things: remain in this presence and give less power to what happens in time.
The G is capitalized because the lines are from a poem.
Hi. I need help with one punctuation: "Remain in this presence, attention of mine; Give less power to what happens in time." Perhaps I've read...
Thanks everyone; mission accomplished.
So I've run into this awkward dance about 4 times now and would like to know the official rule. Take this sentence for example: "I took the...
The opinion that next to no one reads Hesse for pleasure is irrelevant. The fact is that I read Hesse for pleasure and I gave his name because the...
Thanks Backbiter. Wonderful timing to read this quote. See you around the forums.
That's great; 86 pages must already feel like quite an accomplishment. I've got 1 chapter complete on the novel I'm working about a young man on a...
Okay, I have applied the lessons I pieced together, from all the different perspectives offered here, by rewriting the sentence. Tell me what you...
Separate names with a comma.
