Here's how I see it: "can you" asks if you have the ability "could you" asks if there are other limitations that may stop you in a temporary...
I think the color of the eyes is relevant, but unless their an important aspect I don't see the need to write about it in the first couple...
Perhaps if you have artistic talent or know someone who does you could have them paint it for you and it may help breathe a little life into the...
Look what we have here. A forum full of writers! I look forward to reading some of what is written here. Hopefully I will continue to improve as I...
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