One book that I found particularly useful was "Beginnings, Middles, and Ends" by Nancy Kress.
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You have to give the reader something to latch onto or they have no reason to read what you've written. Pique their interest and addict them to...
I think that I'm more of a fly on the wall. I like to let my characters control themselves because I feel that I enjoy telling the story more that...
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