How about a chest infection/pneumonia being the thing that actually carries him off? His primary illness (the tumour or cancer or whatnot) could...
I've been reading a lot recently on another forum about overall goals that characters have that drives the story, one goal that influences...
We've stated this before, it's not the rape that's the problem. It's your understanding of it and your handling of it that is.
There are plenty of reasons why the woman could be stalking your character for so long. I'm not going to write your story for you, but off the top...
Really? Have you not been reading this thread? Re-read this thread. This is what makes me worried. You've had 90 replies to this thread yet...
I said I'd stay away, but I have to echo the above. Rape could be a good motivation for your character, but from what I've read in this thread,...
It will help the story, though. At the moment your story has the potential to be offensive and unrealistic. Changing rape to another crime may get...
Yes it's original, but I do not think you have the capabilities to handle it. Watching movies is not enough. You need to be reading books,...
Why does it have to be a rapist he's hunting? Why can he not be hunting someone who has killed a relative or friend, or some other thing, as...
Maybe the teacher/witch lures them there using some kind of magic so they feel an unexplainable urge to go there? As the MC didn't give her blood,...
Exactly what I was thinking. If she's wielding weapons, it goes without saying that she'll have impressive upper body strength. Even if she's...
I stand corrected. I honestly have no recollection of where I heard/read that they shouldn't be referred to as princesses. It may have even been...
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