Yeah, I was worried that it might lean towards a children's direction due to the characters being animals. The only thing I can think of to remedy...
I just got a job at PetsMart in Riverside, California which is one of the worst places to find a job right now, so I'm pretty happy that I found...
Yeah, I know. I was hoping for someone to point that out so the statement was a bit of a baiting tactic. It's like saying what's the point in...
Well, mine's a mixture of jealousy and discouragement. My vanity is what makes me competitive lol :D
I do. Every time I write something and have someone critique it they come up with a better sentence, and when I take the better sentence and...
Is starting a story with weather bad? Is it because it's been done so many times that it's become taboo?
You should put your writing in the critique section, but I'll help you with this one. This is how I would fix it. The tantalizing view of...
The comments about King's writing being this or that reminds me of this interview: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yIRh26VUNWU&feature=fvst
haha I saw that. Very trippy.
Lol haha Well, the reason I said notebook was because in the story one of the character's has one that's important to him, but I didn't want to...
Well, I guess you'll have to read "The Stand" then to understand what I'm saying lol Or perhaps that means my writing has gotten worse haha...
I just finished "The Stand" by Stephen King. I read it in one week and a half...all 1,135 pages, and I got to say it was great. :) It's the first...
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