I'm not expert but just be ruthless. As quickly as possible, establish your characters, and try to combine some of this dialogue into just one or...
I really like that, 'like life in neon,' because that's really true and given me a lot to think about. Up until this point I hadn't really given...
During the drug experimentation phase of her life, she reaches a point where she realises that the high is not maintainable, and that clues her...
Hmm I do think I agree with you. I feel like chopping it up would make the story feel very different, and although I do like the idea of doing it...
I guess you just have to figure out something that they really really want
I started a thread recently about a 10-12k story I'm writing in which a university student falls in love with a good friend who has a girlfriend....
I think it would be weird for aliens to randomly rock up in the sequel. I think readers want to know what they're in for. Like DeathandGrim said,...
Different fighting styles would be pretty cool to read, I like that idea, that way you can create a real concept/persona stemming from each of the...
I think it depends on the point of the scene, like any other scene. Like Selbbin said, you'd focus on different things depending on the point of...
I'm not sure but I really want to read this haha!
Yeah I was toying with that idea too! Perhaps a love interest that is previously there and pops back up later on as part of her new life. I really...
I actually really like that idea... because the story does cover a span of a few years. God, then I'm thinking, maybe the piece should be much...
She comes out stronger, yes, but she comes out alone. The friends she makes during this time of experimentation really is sort of part of the drug...
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