Hollow points flatten out on impact, thus transfering the energy from the bullet to the tissue, preventing the round from boring a hole through...
Found a site that explains this very well in very few words. (Show, not tell is a guideline not a rule)...
In this form, that would be two actions, thus two senteces? or change the sentence: "Upon reaching the car door, he slammed it shut." He made it...
When I think of throw away characters, I think of red shirts. (Members of the landing party that are only there to die.) This is a character...
I would think they call him Raven, not "the raven." It is related to his name, not tied to the bird. "The Walrus", "The Rooster" seems to...
Fantasy could be: time period-1000bc-early 1900ad's culture/style: European, Greek, Oriental(Japanese, Chinese, Korean,etc) African, Long...
It will only end when it ends. That one person will have the satisfaction that he/she was the only one in millions of doomsayers that was right....
I thought this needed to be bolded. Make sure you send it to reputable agents or publishers. You might start looking for who to send it too, but...
I use characters I created for short stories, in writing exercises, I use them as history of the character. The book they're in is totally...
I don't see any problem with the character. Do your research on the diagnosed problems for ticks and neurocises to write about, keep them...
My thoughts were along the line of telling rather then showing. This last rewrite is much better at showing rather then telling. Use descriptions...
I write in depth descriptions for their bio, but use maybe 1/4 if even that much when describing them in a book. (Hair: length, color, style, neat...
I agree with icecreamy, I think. The power hasn't been seen in a thousand years, so most people that had first hand knowlege is dead(unless...
Many threads deal with names. I use time period specific names. When I write about a human in the middle ages, I look for names of that period...
Separate names with a comma.
