Afterward, they knew who she was.
I agree for the most part, but you have to use the accurate word. Consider how the meaning changes when you sub in a shorter word: He was...
I think it's fine that a character's default mode of dealing with others is to be conceited. But YOU should know more about him than that, even if...
Hugo would arrange a one-night tryst with a supermodel or famous actress. He'd use her and then be done, and send her away. Because nobody could...
One thing that I struggle with is people moving around inside a room. ie.) Do you want to lay out the relevant information about the geography...
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I'll often look at credits for a movie I like and pick out a name from the credits, like a random associate producer's first name and an editor's...
I often use a simple "he said" if there are more than 2 people. I might go with a specific word for the situation like "he whispered" but I try to...
I suppose you'd have to make it a very dynamic character. Their personality, big decisions, etc would have to be really well developed, and I...
It can work as long as it's right for the characters. For example, what's the personality of the parents who are doing the naming? Would they have...
I'm new. My name's shaun. I write genre fiction and have self-published a few short stories and a novel. I think maybe this forum will be...
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