I've already been laying seeds to help readers understand this fact. Although subtle in most of the scenes, there is the underlying fact that...
The want doesn't have to be obvious, sometimes your character doesn't even have to know what they want. In one of my stories, the character wanted...
This is my take on it, and you don't have to listen to me, as it is your story. You mentioned she chooses to become mortal because "She's bored"....
I barely remember this episode of Buffy, so I may honestly end up going back and rewatching it to see if I can get any sort of inspiration/useful...
I do plan on the event being a turning point in her life. I'm just trying to figure out exactly what I would need to do to make it believable that...
I am currently working on a story that involves the main character being a mute. However, there are a few factors about her mutism that I'm trying...
I just have to say I love stories that make me question some part of my humanity. I want that punch in the gut surprise ending, the one that makes...
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