Plotting it out is the "work" part of writing, and it may not be as fun but it saves you from making mistakes down the line and doing rewrites....
You're right, it sounds like it's happening for the sake of happening from what i can tell, but there may be some set up that we don't see
I personally dislike misunderstandings even they happen a lot in real life. Conflict seems more natural when people are forced to act on their...
trippy dream sequences that are awkward metaphors for how the character feels
They are for a comic that I've finished already. They'd look different now since I've gotten more practice in, but I'm figuring out how to write...
Since it's a written medium and understanding the worth of every magic spell would be too difficult because you can't see which attacks have a...
It's kind of like, the magicians are on a whole other playing field, and they're the only ones who can do each other harm. Sensing attacks is...
[ATTACH] I drew these a couple years ago
It's really easy. You need distractions, a "top layer" of story that hides the true "bottom layer". An audience will immediately look for the...
I write backwards. I define the ending and then worry about setting it up.
My story only uses magic to service the plot. The story is full of Magicians who employ strategies to win, but they live in a world full where...
an easy solution is to decide the most interesting way for it to end: who dies for what reason, who is saved, who learns a lesson, and what it...
I think in this case while you wait for the character's flaws to be revealed, you could focus on what makes him relateable and why it matters what...
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